Monday, February 4, 2013

theme week 4

Looking around the school café I see a young man in blue jeans and a black t-shirt and glasses sitting on one of the tan armchairs with a black laptop in his lap, typing. Occasionally he looks sideways and talks to the girl sitting in the tan armchair to his left.  She also is wearing glasses and blue jeans. She has a black and grey t-shirt on and has a smaller silver laptop sitting in her lap. An old fashioned looking lamppost sits between their chairs and a fake tree sits in a square plant pot to the left of the girl. Across the room a woman sits at one of the tall round bar tables, wearing blue jeans and a grey jacket and a blue and grey striped hat. There is a laptop sitting in front of her and she is typing away. A pile of papers sits next to the computer and a barely drunk from bottle of cherry coke sits behind it. There is a blue and grey backpack sitting in the chair to the left of the woman and a red winter coat thrown over the back.



Looking around the school café I see a young man in blue jeans and a black t-shirt and glasses sitting on one of the tan armchairs with a black laptop in his lap, typing, and studding for a class. Occasionally he looks sideways and talks to the girl sitting in the tan armchair to his left, perhaps studding for the same class.  She also is wearing glasses and blue jeans. She has a black and grey striped t-shirt on and has a smaller silver laptop sitting in her lap, headphones hang around her neck blasting music as she studies. An old fashioned looking lamppost sits between their chairs and a fake tree sits in a square plant pot to the left of the girl. Across the room a woman sits at one of the tall round bar tables, wearing blue jeans and a grey jacket and a blue and grey striped hat. There is a laptop sitting in front of her and she is typing away. A pile of papers and a red folder of school work sits next to the computer and a barely drunk from bottle of cherry coke sits behind it, just bought. There is a blue and grey backpack sitting in the chair to the left of the woman and a red winter coat thrown over the back.

1 comment:

  1. So, the second version was hard for you? Hard to push the material a little, to find further angles? That's okay--your versions both observe closely, a very useful writer's skill.

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