Went to science lab then went to the cafeteria to have lunch. Went to the book store and spent another $70 on a book for classes. After that I went to Writing and math. Then I went home and did homework. Made dinner then watched more Supernatural. Went to bed.
Treating each item as equally important makes the reader seasick--we don't know where the horizon is, what's solid and what's not!
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